this is a beautiful poem hun! and I like the rhyme scheme, it's different... keep writing!!

Love,
Tiff

Awesome i love you so much, this was so amazing...the same thing for me, all i wanted was you...and all i do want now is you...you're so amzing hun...i love you with all my heart, my valentine. <33 xxxx one day, i will hold you, andi will hold you for all your valentines and all your days and nights. i love you sweetie. <33 xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

this was so beautiful :)

beautiful poem. wish, i cud wrist like that! keep up your good work :)

take care, 5! always believe in love

♥ amit ♥

Sweet poem, all the words fit perfectly, I can relate to them feelings you expressed, keep it up xxx