Frozen

by Kristin   Feb 14, 2005


I breathe so slowly,
my breath white as snow,
I hold the warm in,
My blood will not flow.

The air seeps through,
I can feel it now,
my breath is now whiter,
I must now avow.

My skin is changing,
It's turning blue,
It's becoming frail,
What should I do?

I should wait for help,
But I see not a soul,
I cannot cry, for my
body I cannot control.

I will go up to heaven
and I hope I'll be chosen,
because I was the one,
Whose soul was frozen

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  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    wow really well written i liked the flow of the poem and how u expressed the words. great poem! take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by polly

    that*

  • 19 years ago

    by polly

    il agree, beautifully written this is my favourite by you, from the ones taht ive read anyway! it flowed perfectly.
    polly

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Kymber*

    wow, beautifully written
    please read my poem personal hell or daddy's word