good work and let me say that going back to friends is hard but it is worth it to keep the ones you love in your life I know keep up the good work

that sounds like what im going through but i couldnt explain it myself. good job it probably explains what a lot of people are going through right now. i loved it!!

HEY AWESOME POEM!! I LOVE IT IT!!! ITS GREAT!!

G-R-E-A-T poem dear!!!! I know that must be hard...if possible, but then again anythings possible if you work at it! I hope things get better and that you two go back to being friends!! the poem was absolutely fantastic!!! Well until next time my friend! Farewell!!!

I think this is good, but I also think that perhaps you could have found better rhythm if you had tried hard enough. Try to make sure there's the same number of syllables in the rhyming lines. But good joB!

thanks david :o) yeaa i kno i need to work on that whole syllable thing.. i noticed it sounds a little funny.. but thanks for the constructive criticism!! it means alot :o)

HEY JESSIE! im in american goverment right now and i thought i would comment on your poem!! ahh and im soo nervous abouit my permit test! IM GOING TO FAIL! and oh man! text my cell when you get this! haha i want to see how it works! ok well me and jemima better get back to work!! haha ill call you after school! okkk adios mi amiga!

xX-Katherine-Xx

omg i love it!!! i can totally relate.. it is hard... so strained for me anyways... .thanks for commenting on my poems
well done.. keep writing
luv always janice

this is beautiful. it's as loving as it is sad, and it brought tears to my eyes. great job.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Very well done Jessie! I really liked this one too! Keep writing, I gotta keep reading! (",)

~Krissy