by ~*LorienElf*~ Feb 15, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
That day has come |
by Amit
sweet poem! very well written. ---> pay more attention towards the length of your lines. ok? (just a tip) if all lines would be same, it would look a nice rhymer. however, it was very nice write. keep writing :) |
by stephalee
good poem i really liked it im giving it a 5! keep it up |