good poem i really liked it im giving it a 5! keep it up
~rock on~

sweet poem! very well written. ---> pay more attention towards the length of your lines. ok? (just a tip) if all lines would be same, it would look a nice rhymer. however, it was very nice write. keep writing :)

take care, 5! always believe in love

dont forget to vote for my poem My first valentine's day with(out) you, my Juliet!,

♥ amit ♥