I love poems witha discernable pattern and this one has it. Great job! 5!

"I give in
No longer can i take this,
The fact ...that no-one realizes...
I even exsist. "
spelled "exist"

I thought this poem was good. The imagery concerning the white flag brings up not only images concerning surrender, but war and strife as well, both of which add a feeling of uphill struggle, as if you've tried very hard to keep going, but you have given up because it was too much, or too dull.

wow great workk i loved itt :D
peace

great work! i liked it alot great work! i definately like the white flag... awesome

-jenn

that is how i feel all the time
and my "friends" don't care

Exellent job! I know the feeling I think most anyone can relate to this poem! Check out mine if u would Thanx!