good poem... keep up your good work. you are a good poet, this one was nice...

take care, 5! always believe in love

dont forget to vote for my poem 50 reasons why i love you!

♥ amit ♥

aww its a really sweet poem...reminds me of how i feel..good work..keep it up <3

Beautifully written..I loved the line:
"I struggled with my emotions buried alive"
Great job...keep it up~Holly

thank you SO SO much for that comment on Two broken hearts and all of the others, I can't believe someone really likes my work that much...yeah, I'm 16 but I was forced to grow up too damn quick!!~ How old are you, David? Well, I find you a very talented writer, your work is deep and provoking. you only have 15 poems as of now but I'm hoping to see more! i love your work, seriously, you're one of my fave writers on here!!
God bless
Much love,
Heather.