very nice poem! beautiful and amazing work. keep writing :) you are very expressive in your work. just a lil correction ---> last line 'now i know i have fail the test' should be 'now i know i have failed the test', thanks. God bless you dear. always keep smiling!

take care, 5! always believe in love

dont forget to vote for my poem 50 reasons why i love you!

♥ amit ♥

Hey I really like your poems keep it up.

awesome work.. i loved it lots !! lol ur the best ever ! thanks so much for ur comment on my poem, it meant a lot .. ! thanks hun !
Maybeth !
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Great poem i really loved it expressed alot about how you feel i hope you keep it up.

The poem is good thought, but it doesn't have a good reading flow. But I love your expession.

that's really good! keep it up and thanks for commenting on mine! it really means alot to me.

Wow, Nicely Written.

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thanx 4 commentin, why cudnt u be with sum 1 then, i read your poem 'my angel' and it sed u wish ur love u didnt have to hide!x

Thanks for your comments I hope you get your girl

aww thats really bad, im sorry to hear that, its such a shame people are so jugemental of peoples sexuality. i hope it all works out for you. i have to hide it because im in love with a lad much older than me and i miss him with all my heart, i just hope by the time im 16 hes still as in love with me as i am with him! xx

hey i submitted more poems read some of them. and comment onthem please

Tammi, what a sad but very good poem. I truly enjoyed it.
Take care and God bless

This is a really heart felt poem. I think it does have a good reading flow. keep up the good work!

Amazing write!
it was a sad poem!
but you feeled it with love...
i liked how u made the last two lines ryme... keep it up!