by Jess Feb 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
* this poem I wrote is about a girl who I know who dosent self harm but tells everyone that she does and that she is depressed. I just want her to know that we are all so fed up with her lies and I don’t mean to cause any offense to any self harmers! |
@...Wow, that was really nice~...i liked the rhyming and the rhythm to it....@ |
Wow, I like this a lot, probably beacuse I have a friend who used to do the same thing. She used to scratch herself with broken light bulbs and then she would wear short sleeves so that people could see, and when I tried to ask her if she was ok, she said it was her cat (her cat is declawed). And it made me so angry that she would show these scars to people asking for sympathy, and I really understand how you feel about, Sarah. I think you did a great job expressing your emotions, keep it up. |
by Lanie
I love this one!!! ( ^ - ^ ) |
by Jess
thanx |
by Tiffany
wow.. that was good.. kind of mean though lol. but then again I dont know her.. lol... but you are a good poet keep up the good work i gave it a 5 |