Hey hey! Nice poem, I love it! Might wanna work a bit on phrasing but a definite 5! Keep it up! Check some of mine out if ye got time! Arrivederci!

Well written, but disturbing. Everyone goes through a faze, were it seems as though no one cares, and their alone in the world. But only the strongest of people know how to come out of it..and they realize how much they would have missed if they fell into that trap. Keep on fighting, and NEVER give up, NEVER give in..if this poem is about yourself, then I wish you all the best of luck. Remember, life is to be lived. Well done, and keep up the great work..poetry is the cure.

§The Only Rose In This Desert§