nice write. keep writing, some good use of rhyme there, and very beautiful words used!

take care, 5! always believe in love

dont forget to vote for my poem 50 reasons why i love you!

♥ amit ♥

Beautifully written....Holly

A beautiful and emotional poem. Worded beautiful and well written. Take Care. lol

Beautiful poem...i like your style of writing...take care and keep smiling

wonderful write. it was so real, and it was very nicely done. ciao~lyn

Very nice, indeed! Congrats on winning the contest!

That was beautiful!! I LOVED IT!!!!

Amazing. Brilliant. Superb. Fantastic.
But you already knew that =)
-Stef

The first stanza is amazing...the second doesn't really make sense, esp. the second line. I love the overall meaning, and the overall quality. May want to think about rewording. But, its pretty!

thanks for all your comments . i promise to get to read all your entries as soon as i can

many thanks and everyone keep writing there is some real talent on this site ..

That is an awesome poem. I really like that. Keep up the great work!

x0-Twinkle-0x

I love this poem Paul, really an amazing job!

this poem is soo pretty

this was very touching. i enjoyed. great poem

very touching.

--chavii--

that's a tight poem maybe you can teach me to get that deep in my soal and say what i really feel

great 5/5

i loved ur poem and it fits in with me and all so yeah keep up the good work peace

that was just awsome, I can't explain how much i had a connection to this poem!

sally

This poem is very amazing and understanding. Please write more like this, Thank-you for sharing this with me!!!