Comments : Second Chance

  • Omg!!! Just..Wow this poem was truly awesome! I enjoyed reading it all! I agree with screenager, I also luv ur style, and I have read a lot of ur stuff before and its rrrreally good! You should be really proud of your writting! Excellent job!!!! Keep it up! And thanks so much for the comment!!:o)
    Shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by LikeWhoaBaby

    Wow. That was an awesome poem! Great Job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    This is really good great job i love it

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Wow!! That was amazing...it was really intense, great job!! Keep on writing and take care..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    oh sweety r u ok? im glad to hear that you think you have a second chance, i know ive had mine..... i love you!

  • 19 years ago

    by Conner

    Awesome! I loved it. Very detailed and well laid out. Great job! Keep it up!! Take care!
    -Conner

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    Wow! My god that was amazing, such deep and passionate work, so eye catching, keep writing xxxx :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    real good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Unrequited

    you amaze me, yet again!

  • 19 years ago

    by Unrequited

    great poem- and you saying i'm your new favorite poet, that is the ultimate compliment! i only hope i can live up to the expectation. Take care!

  • 19 years ago

    by joe

    ah, thats hot
    i liked that ending,
    great work buddy
    loves,
    -Allen

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Andrea, WOW! Beautifully written and so touching. Beautiful poem. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Oneduhful poem Andrea :) So well structured, just glorious!

    Luffuuls <<33
    ;;--Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Hey Andrea, this poem was so excellent! :) I loved it. Thanks for your comment and yes, things are going very well for me. I hope you're doing great! Take care, hun!

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Wow! Such a powerful story, you expressed the feelings of wanting to die, and regret and love, all in one poem! Well done xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    WOW that poem drives me speechless, well done girl! thank you for the comment, i'm tryin to get better w/ my poetry!

    much love,
    Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    wow thats deep, and greatly writen!

    ~lil slam~ PLP (peace love power)

  • That is son sad but the ending is brilliant. its incredible i loved it 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    This almost put me into tears... great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ first time im reading ur poetry, ur a gr8 writer, now in my favs. i'll keep checking ur work! :)
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit