wow strong words you seem really talented excellent poem |
That was so good! sad with a good ending...somthing I don't see to much but I like it! 5/5 |
WOW! Awesome. I loved how u told this and how u showd that we get a socond chance .. keep up the good work.. |
by Dark Savior
This was so amazing, this was the type of poem that i had to read faster so that i could learn the ending too it. i loved it and it was such an amazing poem. It truely shows who you are on the inside at the time...this is a very well versed and constructed poem. I loved every word of it and i couldn't believe it. |