The Wind's Footprints

by Amilo   Feb 16, 2005


Originally I started writing this poem as a small present to my mother on her birthday, and didn't think of posting it. Yet this is the way it turned out... not as personal as I orginally thought it would be.

-the Wind's Footprints-

should Age be like the wind
withering away
the last sliver of whispering leaves
and leaving
the once fruitful trees poor

the old be helpless

should Age be like the wind
unavoidable
yet through the eyes pure
of a child
the wind’s footprints are invisible

and Love be timeless

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  • 19 years ago

    by Angeline

    very good!

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    very good luv it. keep it up 5/5 nice fow~!!~
    thanks for commenting on my poems means alot to me you know~!!~
    xoxox
    nida

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Really good work I loved the poem. If u would please check out some of mine and let me know what u think thanx!

  • 19 years ago

    by Fireflower

    wow.. that was a magnificent poem. it kind of reminded me of the wind.. I liked the way you wrote it. You didn't need to rhyme for it to have a wonderful meaning. I also liked how you capitilized "Age" symbolizing it's true importance on man kind. Keep writing, you're wonderful at it.

    vedali

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    wow, beautifully written. i really enjoyed it, it's nice to see a soothing poem like this once in a while. very eye catching, brilliant work. keep it up :)

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