by Unrequited Feb 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Break me up |
I see where your aim s/n comes from...lovely poem. original and heartfelt. |
some parts of this are difficult to follow, its a good pome, cosider re-reading some parts, and fixing somethings that may stick when you read it. *by stick i mean it dosent sound right* |
by Maddie
Very powerful poem! i like how you've written in with short lines, flows very nicely. |
by Brookeღ
Another sorry it's early! |
by Brookeღ
Anoother great poem very well written u have such a gift. I love ur poems U are r going on my favorites now! |