great poem! i like the style, very well written!

you have such a way with words. i ti squite amazing. keep writting. if you happen to find the time, please read some of mine

Very powerful words...conveyed with such passion! Superbly written~Holly

great poem, it has alot of feeling in it.
thank you for reading my poem,

the pyro angel forever!

Anoother great poem very well written u have such a gift. I love ur poems U are r going on my favorites now!

Another sorry it's early!

Very powerful poem! i like how you've written in with short lines, flows very nicely.

some parts of this are difficult to follow, its a good pome, cosider re-reading some parts, and fixing somethings that may stick when you read it. *by stick i mean it dosent sound right*

I see where your aim s/n comes from...lovely poem. original and heartfelt.

xxx