this is the best one you've written so far and thanks for the comments on my poems...i love mine too! lol altho this guy bluehun was hatin on and dissin u *eh sorry*

love Heather

I really liked this poem. It's deep and really shows why and how much you like writing. Good job and thanx for the honesty of ur comment. appreciate it =) xXx

this whole idea was great but the overall poem was alright.

Expression of self is alwayz good

yes...It is nice.Looks like it took some tinking through

wow! amazing and wonderful poem!!

dont you hate wehn you feel this way about writing a poem and it wont come out... you didnt have that problem with this poem... great work...xox Sherrie

I really liked this one. It's really hard for me to describe why I like writing but even if it was hard for you, it must have been worth it to have something so great come out of it.