You said

by stephanie   Feb 16, 2005


You said you loved me
and that you would never leave me
but one day you looked me in the eye
and said you were tired of living a lie
you said you didn't love any more
as you pointed to the door
you made me leave
that was something that i couldn't believe
my mind just froze
as my heart fell to my toes
my eyes was full with tears
as i thought of all the great years
i felt a lump in my throat
as i put on my coat
i walked out you door
feeling so poor
i fell to my knees
begging god please
oh how I'm going to miss you
because i loved you so true
i wish we could be together
always and forever
how could you take my heart
and then rip it apart

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  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Bennett

    Heres contructive cristicism..k? make the sylablles within you rrhyme scheme match. and if you dont uderstand, write me and I will def. help. You have SUCH talent, if you used stronger words to entice the reader more, you'd be big. Great idea nehind th epoem though. You're awesome

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