by stephanie Feb 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You said you loved me |
Heres contructive cristicism..k? make the sylablles within you rrhyme scheme match. and if you dont uderstand, write me and I will def. help. You have SUCH talent, if you used stronger words to entice the reader more, you'd be big. Great idea nehind th epoem though. You're awesome |