beautiful! very very nice and neatly written!

take care, 5! always believe in love

dont forget to vote for my poem 50 reasons why i love you!

♥ amit ♥

great poem. 5's 2 u

Very romantic. I liked your format and technique of writing in actions modified by broodened adjectives to increase the emotional depth of the piece. I admired the passion and romanticism you were able to display in it, and I loved the last line. It ended on a high and beautifulyl symbolized note with the reader in a delightful stance. I also loved the line,
"A soft rumble of dark electricity"
It's such a beautiful and descriptive symbol set in this mode of passion. Well done

great...