by Broken Hearted Immortal Feb 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You must of forgot to meet me at three, |
by mistake
Short and in the moment of feeling. While there is very little art in dancing around and describing your personal feelings about the point, it is direct and there is feeling embedded within. I hope things have turned out ok. |
by Tyler
It's short, it rhymes, it's to the point what more could I ask for. Shorter poems are cool because I get tired of reading things that are long like halfway through. Your other poems are great too, keep up the good work! |
by Heathergirl
SHORT BUT SWEET.... IS THAT TRUE? ANYWAYS I GIVE YOU A 5/5.... |
by Conner
Short and simple. I like it. Keep it up. Take care! |
Good job! I can relate... |