Pretty good for such a cliche subject as cutting is. My only recommendation is to stop writing about cutting. If you are truly cutting for a valid reason, keep it to yourself. When I see poems or quotes like this, I think how stupid people actually sound telling everyone (no offense to you). If it were a cry out for help or something reasonable, I'd understand but when you just write about it so people will know (or to oddly be accepted or noticed) it's just pointless.

Pardon my annoyance. The poem itself is good.

Caleb,

its not exactly that i'm trying to gain attention by posting these poems, i have written quite a few... its just that the only ones that i feel are any good are the ones that i write out of anger, or another strong emotion... I guess i should take the time to type up one of my happier LOVE poems, huh?

-rissy

even if it is about cutting, i must agree with the author: "its just that the only ones that i feel are any good are the ones that i write out of anger, or another strong emotion..." :)

again i like your poem:)...all of them are good:D...5/5

wow i like this. its really good.