by EpithetPoet Feb 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Strip off my wings |
by topoke
thats really heavy stuff for one so young. keep up your great writing talent. |
Great poem, i loved it, your images get your point across beutifuly! |
I really enjoyed reading this because it started off one way and transformed the ending into something different to what you thinks going to end. Excellent |
by Unloved ♥
I think u did an excellent job..this poem is very sad, but I like how it was a very different topic..unique ya know..great poem |
by No Motiv?
wow....wonderfully written....I enjoyed this poem very much....please, if you could, read my poem "angel of mine" and tell me what you think? Your opinion on that certain poem would be very appreciated. |