Wow, this one is my favourite out of the ones I've read of yours, it made a good beat and yeh it was just really good, keep it up xxx

I like this poem.. Voted a 5! keep it up.. please read my new poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" please comment and vote it would mean so much.. thanks and take care Carmen!

I loved this poem! It was great to read. :)

wow again such a a really good poem. its hard to foget and let go some times but in the end am sure u will if its best for you. it takes time but am sure u will get there in the end. Such a really powerful poem. 5/5 take care

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very nice

wonderful poem~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~
keep it up

nice it is so hard to forget and sometimes u never foret u just but things to da side great poem

your an awesome writer. this was an awesome poem good job

You can't just stop loving someone...that definitely does not work. lol

Nice write...I'm sure there are a lot of girls who will beable to relate to this poem as it happens to the best of us. You really pushed out your emotions and showed the love you held for him...the dirt bag...what ever you'd like me call him...lol

The only thing I would suggest is to lose the commas and question marks as that can sometimes take away from the flow. Nothing serious...your poem, your call.

I enjoyed it ...young love can be the best and the worst....nice write! :)

The rhyming on this poem was exact, and it flowed beautifully. I can definately relate to this poem. xX Stay Strong Xx

I loved this. i know how you feel. this poem was amazing the flow was great and i can relate i think most people can...it hurts i know but great job

This poem is so true, it's really hard to forget someone, even if it's for the better. Nice poem, well written.