Blow out the candle

by Cari   Feb 16, 2005


Blow out the candle
Shut off the lights
My hidden sorrow
Comes into sight.

Blow out the candle
Close the door
Just walk away
Leaving me collapsed on the floor.

Blow out the candle
Close the shades
Keep the truth hidden
Forget the day.

Blow out the candle
Take my life
You left me to die
And now I must pay the price.

I blew out the candle
I shut off the light
Slammed the door
And then took my life.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Missy

    hey beautiful well i like very much just hope its not sumthing you'd do .lol i miss u n love you!!

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Very descriptively done. Good job.
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael

    Once again, it's really good. Although the end makes me cry :*(. Every poem you write is a different style than the one before it and you do them all very well. Much talent. Good girl ;). <3 Mikey

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