your poems are very sad. they are depressed and hurt, I can get the distinct pain vibe, congrads on the writing!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Beautiful. You have the talents of a great writer. I feel like I'm there with you in this poem.

Good poem. Keep em' coming!!! :)

Wow...awesome. Couple questions though...Why do you break the stanzas where you do? And in the last stanza I think reins(definition- leads that are used to guide a horse or other similiar animal) should be reigns(definition-to rule over). Just my thoughts. Perhaps you will answer them? Nice poem.

Yeah you're right about the reigns thing, i didn't notice that lol whoops! And about the way I break the stanzas- I can honestly tell you I don't know. lol. When I wrote this poem it just sorta came to me and I didn't really pay attention to what I was writing.. and thats the way it turned out to be broken up. lol sorry I can't give you a better explanation.

-jenn

great job!! keep it up!! :)

wow, very descriptive and expressive. really deep and emotional, i loved it! amazing work, keep it up. xxx