by Jomar Bautista Feb 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
This is my story... |
Ilove this guy!!! so much that it makes me wanna cry.. mwaah!! love you.. |
by Rolo
Very sweet and sad all at once. There were some grammatical errors, but I still enjoyed it. Nice job. |
by Carmen
it was a good poem, but it was hard to follow. i couldnt really understand what you were saying throughout the poem but it was still good. |
Wow that must have taken a long time to write. It is gr8 2! Im looking forward to reading more of your work when I next have time. |
Hey, it's a great poem. This was a great way of expressing your feelings... very well done! 5/5 |