by Amit
wow! wow! wow! lovely and heartfelt! keep wiring:) |
by Robyn Park
A very sweet and heartfelt poem. It needs a little bit of work, (mainly grammer) but other than that, its a well deserved 4. Keep it up. Like 'Dubbz' said, you can only get better. |
That was awesome! You left me speeechless. I loved the rhyming, the whole poem was just wonderful! You have great talent. Keep it up! |
^_^x... I really liked your poems. |
sorry *like*... I'll keep reading. |
very very sweet!! I really liked it!! |
by James
beautiful poem and well written lov ya :) |
again, wonderful poem, typically I don't care for love poems, but these were good. Thanks again, take care |
by Garrett
The cool thing about your work is that they're all so joyful, but riddled with dark undertones. I like that. |