I really like this poem! It's very well put together, very good flow. 5 for you!:)

Very nice. I liked the repetition. Seems like it would make a good song. Keep it up.

Wow, this one was awesome too! I loved it, it had a great flow too. 5/5 Keep it up!

i gave it five!

another good one. its a 5, too

I really enjoyed that, thank you for the comment

Powerful. I like it.

This flowed really well, I really enjoyed reading it, there was no rough parts it just flowed well done :)

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