It was really nice and the poem was great. It really express the feeling of hope yet there is not a single chance of it. And as for the title I would not comment anything because I think that it is already great. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

nice work, once again, katrina. poem was really good and worth 5!

and you know what katrina, same thing happened to me. my love nidhi said she'll probably call me between 5-7 in the evening, (on 14th) and she didnt. so what??? nothing at all, at least i dont feel the way you felt, shes my love, anything for her!!! she send me SMS text in the morning on 14th, a very sweet valentine's day for my loving romeo, from your loving valentine, your juliet! and you know, i was waiting for her call all the time, after 5'o clock in evening, and she didnt call me up, and i wasnt sad at all, she says, whatever happens, smile always, she hates tears. so i try to be happy and smile always, whatever happens, its always okay with me! i can compromise with anything, everyday is a lover's day for lovers. you know, the card on which i wrote 50 reasons i love you, is still with me? i'll give it to her when she'll be meeting , me, for the first time ever, this july! and she'll give me her valentine's card. its all about understanding between the two! i wont ever get angry on her, that she dusnt call me up or anything. its totally upto her !!!

anyways, keep up your good work, i only want my dear friend to smile always, not feel bad! he's ur love, ur bf, he wont like to see any mark of sadness on your face. rite???

take care, 5! always believe in love

♥ amit ♥

sorry to comment twice, just forgot to tell you, she called me on 15th and we talked for much time, and again on 16th, and we talked for even more time than before. and i was happy all the day!

anyways, check out my new poem i just submitted now! God bless you my dear friend! may you never ever get sad!

take care. always believe in love

♥ amit ♥

Im not sure if I read your comment wrong but "i'll give it to her when she'll be meeting , me, for the first time ever, this july!" that sounds like you've never met her before. Is that right? If so, its amazing that you have this connection none the less

My V day wasn't all that great
so dont feel as if your the only one
because i'm was just as bad

Im sorry that you dont get the scheme. I guess I never think about how other people will read it when I write it. I will try to work on my flow. Thanks for the advice

thank you donaldrminikus along with every one else. I appreciate your comments.

Wow, that was very nicely written. i absolutly loved it! Great job, it was awesome. *hugs*

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ps. as for the topic, you can leave it as it is or change it, either way I think anything you chose would be a good title.

congrats, i just changed the title of my poem...i might change it back, cause im indecisive like that. we shall see. The reason i didnt originally call it that was because I didnt want the title to be like "ugh another v-day poem"...eh, i think ill change it back. i dont know!

loved the poem sorry to hear it though

wow that was really really good..i loved it...and you could do much better than what you call your "bf"!! but keep up your great work!! :)

ouch...but..not even a call though. I dont think that's overreacting. Its not like a asked for porche.

Hey, you stole my name! LOL! J.J. I LOVE this poem. I think its really good. Me and my boyfriend broke up on the 4th and we had been together for 4 months on the 3rd. So, valentine's day was really hard for me. I could really relate to this poem a lot. (*5)

Always,
Katryna Marie

Ooo, I kinda like it with the 'y'. Different. But i personally dont like katrina with a c. Anyways, thanks for the comment and I will be sure to read some of ur poems.

Forgotten Love...ahh! I absolutely adore that title. Change!

what does that mean?...

yep, he definately didnt call me. But he's only my boyfriend, but thats no excuse...your right, it sucked