oh..ur pome is the sweet gift sent from you , :) lol,its soo nice,n the word sweet fits in !

i loved this part:
Something sweet and not wild
Sent from the skies up above
In the innocence of a child.

its really amazing,n i felt like i wanted to express that thing oneday but u did it instead of me : )

great.

Peace,
Darla

So Excellent Excellent and Excellent !
why dont u check some of my poems ? u might like them mate,ok? n tell me what u think : )

give ya 5/5

take care

Aww.. thhis poem is really cute.. i like it a lot.. except for the ending.. i feel like your threw in the word wild just to rhyme with child besides that one line though i really like this poem!