Very nicely written poem, i liked it...5/5

:) Beautiful job. I'm sure the one you have fallen for, is very lucky to have such a wonderful person like you in their lives. Great Job on the poem, and thanks soooo much for the comments on my poems. Means so much to me.

Take Care, Jessica xxxxx

good job

sooo good! 5/5 for this one.. keep up the good work =) Please check out my poems "Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind" and "Lonely girl" thanks a lot.. hugs