Good job! :) I really liked the message behind this poem. Thank you for the comments, they're greatly appreciated. Take care and keep writing! <3

Wow, this one this amazing, the message in this, and the last line, its so true and wonderful. Even if they don't notice that you are so clever, keep going, it'll be worth it in the future, keep it up xxx

its good real good, Take it from me its real good advice. Since I have broken all of those rules. If your fokes arn't proud of you, I shure am. It was a pain for me to clean mysealf up, it truly is best not to start.