i dont have much knowledge of all poetic way of writings, but my sis told me about these forms, she comes on this site, with an id hullo. u can try a search with her id name, if you want to. shes too good at this!

anyways, nice words abt love and lovers! keep writing :)

take care, 5! always believe in love

♥ amit ♥

I thought it was really cool. by the way do you ever attened the Edge

Nice poem, bro! Interesting way of writing. Kudos.

~Ciao LYMTAB Lipton

Wow, that was really cool...great job, it's not very often you get to read poems like that.

ah ha ha..i was sooo the first person to read this! i read it even before it was on here! ^_^ *feels special* i really liked this one. it was good. props!!!