by Kalika
That's so sweet!! very good poem, Keep it up!! |
Very touching! With passion indeed! I love it! 5/5 Keep it up! Arrivederci! |
by Elyssa
So touching.... it had great flow!!!!!! keep up the great writing! |
by FireCracker
OMG - AWESOME JOb, i love it ! it was so moving and touching .. lol.. excelent work, i couldnt have done it better myself , lol .. but also thanks so much for your comments on my poems, they meant a lot and i would love for you to look at some of my other work .. ! keep up ur amazing work ! |
by happy days
great poem, loved the way it flowed, keep it up xxx |
very very good |
I'm ususally not one for love poems, but his one, along with your others, was awesome. keep writing, |
by Lia Jnell
wow one word! |
by Lisa
A love poem.. how sweet with the pink surrounding it and everything... did you write this about the time of Valentines Day? lol... |
Love it:):) |
by Mel
So...eloquent. the word choice was great, and i loved the ending! |
You should have said it!!!! lol....Very sweet!!! God bless you!!! |