by Minkus Feb 17, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
I'm young, I know |
by Jad
WoW.. I liked this poem. It had a good flow and it should the emotion that you wanted. The emotion was truly amazing and It's true that this life is short and that you should live your way and not any way that someone else wants you to. Good Job. |
Ha, I would love to give this poem to my mother someday, but it wouldn't be worth the after effect of doing so, I prefer to remain in one piece. This poem works so well for me because my mother has this idea of a perfect little girl that I should be when we don't see eye to eye about most anything. I wish that she could understand the words of wisdom you have engraved here. |
by Kayla
Great job...great message...I really liked it...5/5! luv yas mwah |
by SuperJenius
WicKed awSome poem ; it got me thinking |
by JLT
Great poem! I hate it when people tell me i don't know anything : P I am sooo with you lol.. Anyways good poem 5/5 here :D.. Keep up the good work sweets *hugs* |