lol point taken YOUNG lol man,it was pretty good though let me be the 1sst to give ya 5

hey i liked this poems i could relate to it keep up the good work 5/5
if you can take a look at mine that would be appreciated

nice one!

great poem!! keep it up!! :)

Great poem! I hate it when people tell me i don't know anything : P I am sooo with you lol.. Anyways good poem 5/5 here :D.. Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

~Jessica

WicKed awSome poem ; it got me thinking
~HazE

Great job...great message...I really liked it...5/5! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Ha, I would love to give this poem to my mother someday, but it wouldn't be worth the after effect of doing so, I prefer to remain in one piece. This poem works so well for me because my mother has this idea of a perfect little girl that I should be when we don't see eye to eye about most anything. I wish that she could understand the words of wisdom you have engraved here.

-Tainted Mikochan

WoW.. I liked this poem. It had a good flow and it should the emotion that you wanted. The emotion was truly amazing and It's true that this life is short and that you should live your way and not any way that someone else wants you to. Good Job.