Damn stright that is how the world is.. you spoke it so well. def. a five!

wonderful poem!!

You got your point across nicely! 5/5 I really like it. Keep it up and take care!

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Thanks for the advice. I like the plot to this story. Good job. 5/5. 3>jess

hummmm.... i realy like this one your a good writer i like it...lol... keep up that great work!...Sherrie

Good Job!!

great job. keep it up david~!!~

commenting again. luv your poems. keep it up
5/5

check out my poems some time~!!~ please read my poem rose or inner darkness or glommy or being forgotten. thanks
i'll return the favour~!!!~
luv
nida