you deserve much better than some guy that you dont know. im sorry that you chose someone like that. I luv you. i hope your ok, you deserve so much better. keep writing, it might help.

wow zoe that was so powerful...im so sorry i dind't do anything when that hapened...i feel guilty now...im so sorry... :'(
be strong, love
E.

Wow Zoe... this poem touched me to the core I am so sorry you had to go through this.. but keep your held held high.. i would never think low of you.. your a awesome writer and a really sweet person 55555

I love this poem.. I think it's one of the best I've seen on this site...You are soo talented.. Keep up the good work and I'd love to read more of your stuff..

Rebecca.

I love this poem.. I think it's one of the best I've seen on this site...You are soo talented.. Keep up the good work and I'd love to read more of your stuff..

Rebecca.

im glad you posted this poem afterall. i really like it. it puts in words some things that i cant

that poem touched me probably more than any other poem. i hope u keep this poem up to show what a true writer can do...i love it and i gave u a 5. i admire all ur work. keep it up. :)

i am so sorry, i wish that never happened to you. it hapened to me to. i am extremely sorry be strong and never forget that you are loved by everyone.

I have so much respect for you girl, you were brave enough to put something like this in a place where you can easily be judged shows self-respect and dignity! You made a mistake but No one deserves to go through that and if you need to talk I'm here! Held you head high and be strong! Anyway Good poem, Loved it!
Keep it up:)
Love
Tash
xoxox

dont judge yourself your a great person who had the diginity to at least post that by the way it was spectacular

wow this poem is great...love how you write keep up the great work....

i know how you feel i also have that problem and people think the same of me but i have been treated liek shit in the past and i think it helps me doing stuff but stay strong and dont forget who you are.....
xoxox Lara Lynn

I am glad it stayed there so I had a chance to read it. It helped me to understand people that have the same kind of problem you have. Keep writing, and sharing your poems! Please read and comment on mine!

OMG!That was SO good! I rarely ever EVER right anything to anyone but...this one is just SOOOO good, keep it up! Oh an dyou know I have a friend who can't say no, she has me say no for her, if u feel like ur gonna do something stupid ( no offense) bring a friend that will step in for you ( just a suggestion) WEll keep it up can't wait to read more of ur work!

Hey this is good....im glad you posted it on the site...im sure lotz of ppl can relate to this...it takes gutz to put it on here, and you got them...ur a very good writer too..keep it up and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy