great...

I loved this poem. It was great!!!

Welcome to the site! Great poem. I really liked it. I think many people can realte. Keep it up!

jaded i like it... I really like your stlye...
Xox sherrie

well there you are the poem seems to be the way you feel it flowed nicley

Wow this is really god Keep it up!!

Wow this is really god Keep it up!!

Wow this is really god Keep it up!!

Wow this is really god Keep it up!!

Confusion and love go hand and hand.

It was cute it was short but the end really needed work. Nice try stay with the rythem you started with that would help out alot...

Your poem just made me cry and Also made me relize iI shouldnt be reading when im feeling this way...But I loved this poem and this was my fav part...Here I am
With another guy
But all I can think about
Is the cute way you pout
Great job...Xox Sherrie

so sweet 5/5

omg that poem was soo great, i absolutely loved it, it was soo cute but also sad, ive been there b4 2 and i know how it feels keep up the great work please rate and comment my latest "together again" thanks

Excellent!

Great! I loved it!! Although I'm a guy, but you still did great and 5/5 definately!!

Wonderful!
Your a very talented writer.

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Wonderful!
Your a very talented writer.

</3 Erin

great poem, great poem, your an awsome writer

...if u realy dont beleive i love....u are extremely talented so keep up the good work...its great that u can write something that good w/o truely beleiving in wut ur writing 5/5 excellent