i love the repeditive (sp?) thing that you put in your poem! it adds an AWESOME effect! great job and great idea! awesome! this reminds me of a situation i'm in, and it was very touching to read! great job
love always,
Abcede :P

another good one.. itd be even better if you elongated it, but more description and detail in it.. but its okay as is too... keep it up
amanda

i love the repetition of here i am, it reli added sm flavour to ur poem.. i lyk it.. nice rhyme..
keep goin
nouna

aww.. Here I am.. Good poem... Being in love is an awesome feeling.. You make it seem alittle sad, but hey.. good job.

Awwwww thats so cute and i've been there with an ex cuz i did love him and didn't know how to say it but now i'm with someone new and my feelings are true! but keep up the good work and if you like you can go read some of mine