by »«¤ß詤»« Feb 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I love you |
by hussain
the rythm and the flow varies in this one and i think its mainly due to the 1 liners. but i enjoyed reading it. seems like the guy (ur bf) is getting abit paranoid and carried away if you ask me. |
love it. very emotional. |
by *Sherrie*
this is great i really like it...so true... keep up the great wprk...xox Sherrie |
Nice poem! i love it! Touching too! hehe! keep up da good wurk and thanks for commenting! 5/5 |
by Emilia
Hi, great poem.. Keep up the good work.. 5 stars for you =) |