Comments : Otherworld

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Underhandedly sensual and haunted.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    You never... Never fail to make me sat back and think about possibilites, Bird.

    This one is going to play on my mind for a while to come yet I think.

    Bert

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Elizabeth!
    apologies for having not been on for a while, hence missing many of your submitted poems. Have no doubt that I am eager to read them and shall do so when I have the chance.
    Onto this piece, wonderful. you ongoing symbols were as usual flawless and lovely. Absolute beauty was planted throughout the whole piece, and I could not help but sigh with admiration at such lines as,
    "A cast of fusion, my cloud of velvet…and you still belong to me, my Constantine."
    I loved your original technique of writing. How is it you contemplate these heros and myths into your work? I have truly never seen anything like it and deeply appreciate it.
    I loved the way you ended each stance with these stories and praised them along with your words. I also adore the last line, it leaves the reader in awe of beauty and incredible presence of poetic appreciation. excellent work

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Thank you all. The fact that you loved this work as much as I did writing it, is truly motivating!