very very very good

I thought this was a brilliant piece of work. It used original rhymes and I also liked it because I know exactly what your talking about. People can be so ignorant sometimes, and not realise how much pain someone else is in. Well I hope things get better for you real soon.
Take care,
Rachelxx

Once again great!!!-Always and Forever~Alicia~

That is an awesoem poem i know exactly how you feel and you arent alone! you are a very very good wrighter!