This was very well written. I liked it a lot. Definately a 5/5. I'll have to read some more of your poems.

omg that was so sad..... really powerful too.. my eyes started to water..i liked the rhyme scheme too, sort of bold and powerful. keep writing!

vedali

wow ur rhyming scheme is different but it works really well in this beautifully sad poem!! well done.
luv always janice xoxox

this is such a sad poem. It flows really well, congrads on the flow and plot of the poem. it was a supremly great poem, very moving.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Great poem! you get a 5 from me.

VERY well written, and i loved the way it was so sad. You seem to have talent writing this kinda poems. Good job!
~s~

wow very nice i loved it...keep it up!
Love always,
Angel

I love it! I can relate! You have talent indeed! Definitely a 5! Keep it up! Arrivederci!

wow loved it. Keep up the good work!!!

Wow, this poem is so great! Very powerful. Thank you so much for the comments, they meant a lot.

Love,
Tiff

Wow this is awesome...I'm putting you on my faves...I'll read the rest of your poems later!

Wow, I love this poem. Took my breath away. I gave u a 5.
3> jess

that was really sad!! you have a nice choice of words!! keep it up!! :)

Really liked this poem. I added you to my favrotie's. :)