Dad

by JJ   Feb 18, 2005


I don't know what's gone wrong
Between you and Mom
Is it because of me why you left?
I promise you dad
I'll do everything you and mom tell me to do
I'll do my chores from now on
I'll keep my room clean all the time
I'll get good grades at school
You'll never have to tell me to-
I'll take out the garbage
and mow the lawn
I'll never complain again
I'll be quiet as a mouse
You'll never know I'm in the house
The new shoes I've been beggin for
I promise I wont mention them anymore
I'll forget every dream I've ever had
of going to disney land
I'll give up my birthday presents
We can skip christmas every year
Whatever it takes dad
I promise I wont ask for anything again
All I ask in return...
Dad, please come home!

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  • 19 years ago

    by lisa marie

    Awh this poem is so sad. I just hope you really don't feel like it's your fault. much love.

  • 19 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    heyy this is a great poem. sry bout ur dad tho ... i hope everything worked out tho. xoXox peace out

  • 19 years ago

    by Conner

    Great poem! Sorry about it though. I don't know that feeling but I'm sure it hurts. Keep on fighting though and keep up the good work! Take care!
    -Conner

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    wow thats a great poem, but its really sad.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    luuved this poem!1 and i hope everything turns out ok with ur friend!! keep up the gd work..once again itz woderful!!
    tc byeee