Hehe! good on ya gurl u managed 2 make an erotic poem without it bein sleazy! Congradulations. This was x work. 5/5 al the way! Peace and luv, XxX mia

wow

wow- i got off on this one- i'm rock hard for this poem!

you must know that i love sex and i like to read about it too.... lol.... anyways, i love your poems. keep writing, especially poems like this!

That was ... wow... extreamly hot! ... im so in the mood:P! Keep it up!

Not just descriptive and raw, but emotional and sensual too. A good balanced combination that makes for a great experience. Probably more enjoyable to write than read, too.

Excellent effort.

Bert

Wow-- Really good.. Keep up the good work.. 5/5

i got wet just by reading this

lol great job hun! Keep on writing :)

I only have one like you are saying and it is called "Hands of Innocence." I have a few different missions people have given me with the eroticas, so I am checking them off the list, however this suggestion has been made before, so thats why I wrote the other.

I understand where you're coming from, and thank you for being honest.

Loves

Wow, I loved this poem! Very erotic and sensual. It made me wanna have some fun with my girlfriend :D, Keep up the good work, bye!

Wow....i need to go lie down.

I'm not even gonna try to discuss this....i've never stalked anyone in my life..but your making it hard for me.

Heh heh.

Wow! (Nuff said!)

damn! i like it!! !5!

Wow that was great

i really felt that peom
I was really get exicited that was great

loved it *5*

Wooo, that was something. is it hot in here.

Yea! wow... haha that was hot!!

Wow! Great poem. I love it. Were do you get your inspiration from?

Mk so..f_uck me now?

Whoa, another great poem! haha WOW!