Overpowered

by Ele   Feb 18, 2005


Enchanted by your beauty
lost for breath or words
my eyes are stuck on you
i love you so much, it hurts

my heart is left in shock
my body seems weak and lame
you turn my world upsidedown
just whispering my name

i know you see me staring
you may not understand
the effect you have on me
with just the soft touch of your hand

do you not know that i'm breathless?
do you not see me struggle to breathe?
do you not see me overpowered?
don't you see what you do to me?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    well dun its really gud keep writin an plz chek out my poems if u get chance i love comments! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Danny

    A great poem, keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    lovely poem with good rhyme!

    take care, 5! always believe in love

    ♥ amit ♥