~ very very lovely and lengthy write. good job, done!
~ take care, 5!, always believe in love ~amit

Wow!! That was so beautiful, you have such a great imagination, keep it up xxx

wow! loved it!

Not sure how I missed this being posted, and so long ago at that!

An interesting tale to be told, and I can't help but wonder how it came to you. Inspired by the tale of Cinderella, and yet there is something to the crafting and progress within the poem that makes me wonder at your choices in formulating events. For that, if nothing else, I enjoyed its telling and where it led.