The Ultimate

by Broken   Feb 18, 2005


I've killed you
Nothing more to you is left
I tore out your heart
And stole your last breath

Pain and suffer
Was all you knew
Thought I was different
Now what'll you do?

Bang my head against the wall
Splatter my blood upon your soul
I know I deserve it
If it'll make you feel whole

Take my heart
Tear it in half
Take it with you
To show your wrath

For every single lie
Pull out my fingernails
One by one, to punish me
If all else fails

Nothing more, nothing less
Can be accepted
I need the ultimate
For the pain i've inflicted

*I wrote this a little bit ago... I started writing it and then I quit and then I started to finish writing it but my mood had changed, so...it doesn't flow very well. But if you have any suggestions...feel free to dish them out. Thanks.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by kendrea

    hey, i couldn't tell that you stopped but i really liked alot.you did great!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    I couldn't tell that you broke off in the middle...I even re-read it to see if I could see where and I can't, it flows perfectly well to me. That was a good poem and a great way to word things. You always have those creative Ideas to relate things to and creative ways to put things across...mine are always so straight forward...I'm jealous!!! lol. Luv ya sis!
    --Sierra Rae

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    i like it! i think its interesting how the mood changes making the poem a bit of variety of the flow.

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