i like it! i think its interesting how the mood changes making the poem a bit of variety of the flow.

I couldn't tell that you broke off in the middle...I even re-read it to see if I could see where and I can't, it flows perfectly well to me. That was a good poem and a great way to word things. You always have those creative Ideas to relate things to and creative ways to put things across...mine are always so straight forward...I'm jealous!!! lol. Luv ya sis!
--Sierra Rae

hey, i couldn't tell that you stopped but i really liked alot.you did great!!!!!!!!!!!!